SciFi Fantasy Saturday- May 5

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For Cinco De Mayo here’s another snippet from Aristeia: Revolutionary Right. If you like it, the ebook is still on sale for another few days for only $0.99.

Deciding a little gesture could go a long way, Maarkean lowered the pistols he was holding. His fingers never left the triggers, and he was confident he could bring a gun up faster than the Terran could cross the space between them, but it was still a risk. Conversations at gunpoint never went very well, though.

The Terran visibly relaxed. Maarkean spoke first. “Let’s say I believe you. And let’s say I’ll overlook, for now, the fact that you’ve tried to steal my ship not once, but twice. We share a similar problem.”

“And what might that similar problem be?”

“Both of us were released when we shouldn’t have been, and both of us could find that error corrected at any moment. Your solution was to run before they figured it out. I can understand that; what is one man capable of doing?”

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13 Comments

JC Cassels · May 5, 2012 at 8:30 am

Sounds like quite a standoff you’ve got going there! Great snippet!

T. M. Hunter · May 5, 2012 at 8:40 am

I agree…conversations at gunpoint never end well. Fun snippet!

Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller) · May 5, 2012 at 8:54 am

Nice set up, Wayne! Great hook.

cpsingleton · May 5, 2012 at 9:01 am

gripping!
Love a good stand off before breakfast!
Well done.

J.M. Blackman · May 5, 2012 at 9:03 am

Great tension, but I really loved the dialogue and inner monologue of your character–pulled me straight into the scene. Fantastic.

T.K. Toppin · May 5, 2012 at 10:03 am

Well, I just couldn’t resist, and bought a copy!! Now I’ll be able to find out what happens next!!! 🙂

    Wayne · May 5, 2012 at 11:11 am

    Sweet! Score one for the snippets. Soon everyone will buy a copy and I can rule the galaxy! err…umm…thanks!

Cary Caffrey · May 5, 2012 at 10:26 am

Whenever I have a conversation at gunpoint, I always remind myself, Han Solo shot first!

Sue Ann Bowling · May 5, 2012 at 1:04 pm

Sort of “enemy of my enemy is my friend?” Watch out, that doesn’t stick very long.

Cassandra Davis · May 5, 2012 at 1:23 pm

I was going to make a comment about how conversations at gunpoint invited tampering by George Lucas, but, as usual, Caffrey beat me to the punch.
I liked this and now I have a new book to add to my Kindle reading list.

Patrick Stutzman · May 5, 2012 at 6:31 pm

He tried to steal the ship TWICE?! Some people never learn. smh

Great snippet! I love the tension building between the two.

Misa Buckley · May 7, 2012 at 7:20 am

Ah, temporary alliances. Always fun, but beware their sudden but inevitable betrayal.

Pippa Jay · May 8, 2012 at 12:19 pm

Sometimes you just have to take a risk. :0)

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