SciFi Fantasy Saturday- April 7

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At the suggestion of Patrick Stutzman, I’ve decided to try participating in the Science Fiction Fantasy Saturdays. It looked like a good way to introduce my novel to others and introduce myself to some potentially new stories to read. It’s always good to find good scifi/fantasy stories.

So, without further ado, here is my contribution for this week, a snippet of Aristeia: Revolutionary Right.

 “Joss,” Maarkean said, refusing to let his feelings show as he took a seat across from the other man.

Josserand continued to smile. “Always good to see you, Maark. How’s your sister?”

“Still not interested in you,” Maarkean said.

“Pity. Despite the horns, and the fact she’s related to you, she is a fine-looking woman.”

“You Terrans, always focusing on the differences between species.”

Josserand smiled suggestively. “Oh, trust me, I truly appreciate the aspects of your sister that are similar to Terrans.”

Trying not to let the man get to him, Maarkean tried to change the subject. “I hear you have a job for me.”

Surveying the room, Josserand said in a noncommittal tone, “I may have a job. Whether or not it’s for you remains to be seen.”

Check out other snippets here:

Grosjean Chronicles by TK Toppins

Bellica by Katje van Loon

Arcana Double Cross by JC Cassels

Alone in Paradise by Patrick Stutzman

And I Feel Fine by Misa Buckley

Unicorn Keep by Angelia Almos

Double Trouble by TM Hunter

Jarn’s Journal by Sue Ann Bowling

Jane’s Shadow by Liana Brooks

Categories: Writing

10 Comments

Liana Brooks · April 7, 2012 at 8:25 am

Welcome to the reading ring!

I like the snippet, it gives a nice setup without wasting words.

T. M. Hunter · April 7, 2012 at 9:31 am

Great snippet…love snippy dialogue between characters. Definitely sounds like something I’d be interested in.

    Wayne · April 7, 2012 at 9:40 am

    Cool, I was worried dialogue without context might be confusing.

T.K. Toppin · April 7, 2012 at 10:01 am

Loved the interaction between the two, you can just tell of their long history together. Great stuff, you’ve piqued my curiosity. Oh, and welcome to SFFSat!!

Angelia Almos · April 7, 2012 at 11:36 am

Great dialogue scene. Already wondering what their history is.

Sue Ann Bowling · April 7, 2012 at 12:09 pm

Nice. You can tell they know each other well enough to get in digs at each other.

Patrick Stutzman · April 7, 2012 at 8:12 pm

Glad to see you made it, Wayne! Welcome aboard!

I like the dialogue in this snippet. It flows really well. And, we get some nice insight into Joss’s personality, too.

JC Cassels · April 8, 2012 at 2:35 am

Great dialog. You really get a feel for their relationship. There’s a lot of characterization there without a lot of wasted words. Great snippet!

Welcome to the ring.

Misa Buckley · April 12, 2012 at 10:03 am

Welcome to SFFSat! And what a great snippet to start with – I love the dialogue!

Wayne · April 12, 2012 at 10:14 am

Thanks, all! It was a fun experience.

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